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Okay, this looks like a meme that's fun and something I might actually finish:

Give me a character I'm familiar with and I'll either write you a ficlet (~100 words) or the equivalent amount of personal canon. (Academic!Zuko is totally a separate character from canon!Zuko, btw.)

Maybe this will help with the writer's block? (fma_ladyfest deadline on the eighth. Eep!)


EDIT: An explanation as to why I haven't written the aca!Zuko fic yet, in response to the question when, where and how you see him diverge from canon!Zuko?

I'm actually not sure about that yet! It's probably either a slight difference in him, when he was young, or a difference in the Fire Nation as a whole. Because I have it in my head that the Fire Nation, and parts of the now-Earth Kingdom, used to speak a very different language than the fairly unified one they do in canon, but I haven't figured out how late they would have given that up as the official language. People would still speak it for a while after it was made un-official, at home if nothing else, but even if Aang's slang was outdated it was still understandable. Which would mean either that it was made un-official more than a hundred years ago, or that people in the Fire Nation still understand a fair amount of it even if it sounds outdated and awkward. (Which might mean that Zuko and Azula learned some of it from Ursa? Or maybe Zuko was a tiny child-academic who studied it on his own?) 

And of course I've no idea at all when the Earth Kingdom was unified and made to speak a single language, since it was probably a bunch of different ones for a very very long time. ^_^

So pretty much the difference between academic!Zuko and canon!zuko is all wrapped up in regional and linguistic differences in the A:TLA world and the things he learned/was taught before he got banished. Canon!Zuko, for instance, can probably compose some acceptable poems, but academic!Zuko would have learned enough classical court poetry to spot references to it in everyday speech. (Which could lead to all sorts of fun in Ba Sing Se, when he has a moment of thinking "oh, they're referencing that famous poem that compares alcohol to politics -- wait, no, crap. wrong language, wrong country. no, wait again, are they taking International Poetry at the university? Are they the kind of people who would make cross-language references about plotting against the government? Or is there an Earth Kingdom thing they're referencing here that I'm missing entirely? ARGH.")

So basically my writing of academic!Zuko is stalled by my ignorance of Asian literary traditions and linguistic differences, which are the kind of thing that I could easily spend the rest of my life researching. And it would be AWESOME. And this is why I can't really answer your question, because if I knew enough to answer it completely I could start the damn thing. XD

Date: 2010-10-01 04:21 pm (UTC)
fulselden: Zuko, fish on head. (Better.)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
there probably wouldn't be an Agni Kai in this universe, since Zuko wouldn't have been breaching royal protocol, just making some unwise statements

Good point! (heh, can you tell that my instinct is always to cling to canon, by my fingernails if need be!). And in fact I seem to remember reading somewhere that going off to search for the Avatar was a traditional rite of passage for Fire Nation royals (or, well, since Sozin, I guess). So Ozai could absolutely spin it as a great opportunity and a coming-of-age duty for his son, even if it would be entirely evident to those in the know that he was essentially shoving Zuko unceremoniously offstage. And, yes, a scar-less Zuko would require a lot less suspension of disbelief when it comes to him being inconspicuous and unidentified. Though, mind you, it did seem to work quite well in terms establishing his bona fides as a victim of the Fire Nation, so there’d be that to work round...

And as you say, given that his father BURNING HALF HIS FACE OFF didn’t really bring it home to Zuko that he was the ugly duckling, everything remaining a matter of whispering campaigns and nuance might just serve to tangle up the family relationships even further.

perhaps the Avatar is portrayed as the relic of an outmoded belief system

I love this idea – and as you say it would absolutely tie in with a quasi-theocratic Fire Nation, with the Fire Lords claiming some special link to ‘the superior element’ – I’m fond of the idea of them claiming descent from some Fire spirit or what have you, myself. Though I’ve also come across some mention of the position of Fire Lord starting off as just head Fire Sage (which is so suggestive for Fire Nation history, oh man), which vaguely works against my spirit-descent idea, but would work really well in terms of giving Mai a pretext to claim the throne – she could say she was returning the position of Fire Lord to its pious roots (while, naturally, hanging on to all the power it had accumulated in the meantime...).

And speaking of Mai, yes, you do have a point that it might be EXASPERATION with drawn-out, torturous politicking in the wake of Ozai’s downfall which would see going ‘right, enough of this’ and seizing the reins. Especially as she seems very much a creature of power and privilege despite herself, and would I imagine want to ensure she had a place near the top of the Fire Nation court carved out for her – and if being Fire Lord was the only way to ensure that, well, I can see her stepping up. And she’d be hella good at delegating, too, I imagine – quite unlike Zuko. And I can entirely see her just making off with the Fire Lord’s seal until such a time it became officially hers!

Heh! Poor Earth King, I feel that would be a marriage of convenience and a half! But also quite plausible, though I can see there being massive internal opposition – shades of Mary Tudor getting hitched to Philip, though of course Mai would be actually politically astute, which might make all the difference. And in terms of succession, I guess, actually, that once the nobles had sucked it up and accepted a non-bending woman on the throne (I mean, quite apart from the thorny question of Fire Nation gender equality, it’s canon that the last five or so Fire Lords have been men, going by the giant wall-o-Fire Lords in the palace), they might just be willing to be grateful for having an heir at all, full stop.

Date: 2010-10-01 10:25 pm (UTC)
fulselden: Zuko, fish on head. (Better.)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
Oh, wow, SPIRITUAL CHAOS after the collapse of Sozin’s line (or whatever – I mean, they’d probably actually be called after some much more ancient Fire Lord) would be awesome – there’s such a lot of potential for a canonically active spirit world to have juicy political ramifications. And I can absolutely see Mai pinning her family tree to the wall in front of a group of ornery nobles, and chucking in a dart to mark every second cousin and great-grandparent who is demonstrably either vaguely royal or a Fire Sage ... whereupon the scroll ends up pretty much bristling, and everyone backs down rather hastily.

And the prospect of someone as down-to-earth as Mai holding elaborate ceremonies, or even negotiating with spirits, is delicious! And, heh, aca!Zuko persuading Wan Shi Tong to give him library access, so to speak, is an awesome idea in and of itself.

I suspect the Fire Lord having to be a bender (though, mind you, I think that’s only canon by implication) is very much a result of their Fire Sage-y roots. Though I imagine it would be less a matter of being able to throw fire at spirits (given that bending doesn’t even work in the Spirit World – it seems like an iffy weapon to use against them even in this one) and much more a result of benders being seen as blessed by Agni or what have you – which of course could easily shade into the ugliness of ‘the superior element’ propaganda we see Zhao spouting on the show.

everything the Fire Nation got out of the war (which was mostly lots of dead soldiers and angry citizens, really)

Well, plus presumably a fair amount of plunder and possibly, say, massive rice shipments from the Earth Kingdom – post-war reconstruction just seems like a giant mess for whatever Fire Lord you have attempting it, which is one reason I was reticent about seeing Mai as willing to take on the job, given that she isn’t all idealistic and dutiful in the way that Zuko is. But then, she is undeniably efficient and unwilling to take any bullshit! And, yeah, if Mai and Kuei could get through the first couple of years – and produce heirs – everything would probably simmer down. I mean, it’s not as though people would have any illusions about how ugly war could be, as you say.

Date: 2010-10-02 09:16 pm (UTC)
fulselden: General Iroh, playing earth-water-fire-air. (Default)
From: [personal profile] fulselden

It makes me go "omg, I would love to co-write this with you!" and "wait, I would be terrible at co-writing.")

Heh, thank you – I’m entirely flattered! And I kinda feel exactly the same – I suspect the Avatar shipping wars would have nothing on me defending my territory over a pet metaphor or something equally trivial. Though I feel vaguely guilty here – I’m getting all the fun of world building with none of the hard graft of getting stuff down on paper... Not that writing isn’t fun, of course, but the attendant frustration levels are exponentially higher in my (very limited!) experience.

Man, I love the idea of haunted artefacts (which of course Embers gets a fair bit of mileage out of) – I mean, when your ceremonial vestments have been handed down from Sozin, for instance, that’s a whole lot of negative vibes right there. Not to mention an entire lineage-worth of infighting Fire Lords clogging up the dreams of the present incumbent (assuming reincarnation is an Avatar special-feature, or that Fire Lords get some kind of dispensation from it, the better to stick around and bug their descendants). Also awesome: the idea of Mai and her blessed knives, cutting through the crap of long, elaborate Fire Sage-ly ceremonies. Because, yes, I’m sure that rituals would balloon out of all proportion to the actual necessary rites, given a dedicated class of Fire Sages who’d want to attract patronage and what have you.

Being favoured by Agni does seem a likely Thing for the royals – which would help explain why Zuko, being a fail!bender for most of canon, was such an embarrassment. And while I don’t think any of that was actually canon, it would be great to play with the idea of water and fire being akin in this way – perhaps earth is too pragmatic and air too detached for those elements to need Patron Spirits to gift them to humanity or however bending happened in the first place (spiritbending?). But yeah, there could very well be the tradition that the Royal Family is entrusted with carrying on Agni’s fire, specifically – that their inner fire is qualitatively different. And then, when the line ends (if you don’t count Mai) with no apparent ill effects - massive implications for the power of the Fire Sages.

I’m pretty sure the Earth Kingdom would have been more or less the bread basket of the Fire Nation. I mean, even assuming the Fire Nation had been largely self-sufficient once upon a time, a century of industrialisation and war – and breeding babies for war – seems likely to have left them hugely reliant on imports.

I forget, did the FN royal family have a secret library?

Well, if they didn’t, THEY SHOULD HAVE DONE. Seriously, the Fire Nation royal collection of ancient scrolls and plundered Air Nomad and Earth Kingdom artefacts is one of my most treasured pieces of head-canon! And I can absolutely see copies being pretty central to any peace treaty – and being something aca!Zuko would very much have a vested interest in. Though assuming the Earth Kingdom has invented printing, or is on the verge of it (which seems likely, given the potential uses of earthbending) I can see him lobbying rather urgently for all this stuff to get put in print asap.

Date: 2010-10-02 09:43 pm (UTC)
fulselden: General Iroh, playing earth-water-fire-air. (Default)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
Also - oh wow, I just found your fantastic aca!Zuko verse Mai piece up at White Lotus: thank you so much! I must get involved in crazy-long threads-o-world-building more often. I commented properly over at AO3, but, yeah, forget everything I said about the end of the royal line not having massive implications for the Fire Nation's protection from spirits, because the idea of them being left essentially open to their influence - malevolent or otherwise - is just golden. Though, hmm, it does make aca!Zuko abandoning the throne seem especially irresponsible. I wonder if he could be disqualified by way of too much traffic with Earth Spirits in Ba Sing Se or something?

Date: 2010-10-02 11:41 pm (UTC)
fulselden: General Iroh, playing earth-water-fire-air. (Default)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
Yeah, I think a general decontamination (or reconsecration/deconsecration...) of the Fire Lord’s palace would be Mai’s first step. And, oh man, haunted places: fantastic. Plus, Ba Sing Se has such potential – I remember reading somewhere that the creators envisaged it starting out as an actual underground city – hence the remaining catacombs. So perhaps the whole city is built on a network of empty houses and spirit-colonised caverns.

It's also a nice explanation for why the Dai Li all have the same general face-shape.

I THINK YOU MEAN A HORRIFYING EXPLANATION, which is also of course awesome. I too am very fond of the (essentially Embers-verse?) idea of the Dai Li as the spiritual immune system of Ba Sing Se. And the idea of them somehow being imprinted with some spirit-deep link to the city itself is fantastic. But ... I’m guessing you never exactly retire from the Dai Li, oh man (or perhaps if you do make it through, you still have the city in your head the whole time. Or you miss it horribly if they mindbend you back ... argh can you tell I find this totally disturbing?).

And, yep, that looks a more than plausible scenario for the final meltdown in the Fire Nation from Zuko’s pov. And I guess the Fire Nation wouldn’t spend all its time under Fire Lord Mai being plunged into mini Fimbul Winters and being otherwise subject to crazy spirit attacks – I imagine they’re considerably better off, overall, under Fire Lord Mai (heh – I love typing that!) than under aca!Zuko, even if he would act as an automatic bulwark against spirits.

And, man, if writing is the easy part ... it would be totally great if some iteration of aca!Zuko got written! Totally. I mean, not to pressure you or anything...

Date: 2010-10-05 03:22 pm (UTC)
fulselden: General Iroh, playing earth-water-fire-air. (Default)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
I love the idea of the new, un-warded royal palace (especially as we know Roku blew half of it down anyway – which is probably some bad mojo in and of itself). At least if anyone’s likely to know the palace inside out, it’s Mai and Ty Lee – I can imagine tiny!Azula making sure she knew every inch of the place and having her henchkids in tow.

And yep, I guess you’re pretty much Dai Li for life. On their days off (if they had them!) wouldn’t they have to secure their uniforms in some kind of spirit-proof box before they went out to be clumsy and wistful and play pai sho with the old men of the city? Or perhaps they just socialise amongst themselves – I wonder if you could justify female Dai Li, given that I imagine scary secret police are moderately likely to select on merit. And they were founded by Kyoshi! I guess it depends on how sexist you make the Earth Kingdom. And I imagine that after a few diplomat visits to her husband Mai would make sure they let girls in if they didn’t already – as you say, she’d probably be A Good Thing for the Earth Kingdom.

And, yep, the idea of a mini-era of spirit-war, so to speak, following the war proper seems really satisfying, somehow – and of course it would give Fire Nation civilians a very real and urgent incentive to get themselves interested in the old ways, regardless of how keen they might be on true firebending.

... Speaking of which, oh man, Aang and ... everyone. *Hairpull* seems appropriate! I wonder if you could have everyone (well, minus Toph and Suki, probably) coincide at the North Pole? It just seems such a Spirit World focus, and Koh is such a gift. A creepy, creepy gift. Maybe Zuko, assuming Iroh and his wee ship as per normal, could work things out with Aang somewhere along the journey northwards and end up joining forces. And perhaps with Iroh bringing out his Dragon of the West side on behalf of the Northern Water Tribe, things might go much less smoothly for the Fire Nation invasion forces? Which might mean no dead Yue, which is an idea I’m always vaguely fond of, because I object to her storyline in principle if not in execution (that was such a great finale!). And it seems there’d be a lot of stuff you could do with a spirit-touched princess still wandering around. Though, hmm, she could also be very useful as the moon...

And, oh man, the assassination. Azula? Less laden with daddy-issues than in canon, out to claim the throne on the DOBS? Which, man, might pollute the Fire Lord’s line sufficiently that Agni basically disinherits the entire family on the strength of it? Though, hmm. That still leaves you with Azula to deal with. Problems! And I wonder if that scenario isn’t a little glib anyway...

But, yep, Mai and Ty Lee dealing with the aftermath in between fighting off spirits sounds like awesomeness!

Date: 2010-10-07 12:36 am (UTC)
fulselden: Azula. ((The eagle flagged to the sun))
From: [personal profile] fulselden
[First of all: I was just over on LJ commenting on Bookelfe’s (who I’ve only just discovered and she is awesome!) verdict on the high and low points of season three Avatar when I scrolled up and saw your comment! Only of course I didn’t know it was LJ-you, so I was all, Oh internet, you and your weirdzo coincidences! And then I clicked and all was made clear. Which still kinda leaves me going, Oh internet!]

BUT ANYWAY. Yeah, I can see the Earth Kingdom as a place where oppression is very much a matter of proprieties and mores, which would make Earth Consort Mai blandly refusing to give a damn about such things hugely powerful, I think, even if she wasn’t specifically exerting herself to level the playing field for women (not that she wouldn’t want to, but it might come lower down on the list than ‘preventing civil war in the Fire Nation’, at least at first).

And, yes, somehow I find the idea of spirit-touched uniforms really compelling? And I guess they would give plenty of fuel for WACKY GRAD STUDENT HIJINKS, with potential srs consequences and perhaps a side of disguised ninja-ing from Zuko which nearly ends very badly when he finds secret knowledge about the city nudging at the back of his mind and is distracted from IMPORTANT NINJA BUSINESS.

Much as I like the idea of the Sun Warriors coming and teaching Ancient Ways (tm) to the Fire Nation, I suspect that they would be absolutely furious with the place for breaking its alliance with the spirit world? I mean, I guess they might be glad of any return to the old ways, but given that they’re exasperated with the place anyway, to put it mildly, and not exactly given to outreach, I think a palace squabble bringing angry spirits to their doorstep (though one presumes they’d have wards, so no further) might make them pretty recalcitrant about chipping in to help the new regime. Though … somehow the idea of Ty Lee on a diplomatic mission to the Sun Warriors seems immensely appealing!

And good point on skipping to the North Pole asap – and, yes, Zuko being in disguise and getting found out through the power of poetry by Aang sounds like good times. Though I wonder if Iroh wouldn’t at least lobby pretty hard to be disguised as a tea merchant, rather than a noble! And, heh, Zhao. I feel his urge for IMMORTAL GLORY would probably come to the fore pretty strongly in a time of domestic upheaval – perhaps he himself is only a couple of steps lower down the blurry line of succession than Mai and any other major claimants, so he has an even more massive vested interest in returning swathed in military glory. And, hm, if he found Aang already gone and had to skedaddle home with his tail between his legs and half a fleet, I can see him being – well, hardly a worthy antagonist for Mai, but perhaps a useful pawn in some palace plot?

And Yue, hmm. I quite enjoy the idea of her ending up at the head of the Northern Water Tribe, with Mai ruling the Fire Nation and obviously influential in the Earth Kingdom – and, heh, maybe Katara in the South if Sokka is off having adventures and a billion boomerang-throwing babies with Suki! But, then, I also quite like the idea of her throwing it all up and going off to play sweet-but-disaffected royals with Zuko and Iroh. And your idea of her popping into the Fire Nation to do some free-lance spirit-fighting and running into Mai is awesome. So, dilemma, horns of!

And, yes, Azula, very much not the type of person who's good at maintaining already running systems. And yet much too interesting to get rid of as cavalierly as Ozai – plus, seeing her fighting spirits and failing to save peasants and such alongside Mai and Ty Lee would be so fascinating. As would of course the moment when everything turned disastrous enough for Mai to have to step in. Actually … I wonder if it couldn’t be Ty Lee and Azula heading off to see the Sun Warriors. I can see Azula agreeing on the (secret?) basis that, well, if she can’t have the throne and she isn’t going to get a chance to rival her fuddy-duddy uncle in war, she can at least match herself against a dragon.

Also, heh, Koh and Mai’s poker face: a battle with a very clear victor!

Japanese spirits, oh man. A basic library search (for, uh, ‘japanese spirits’) throws up ONE BOOK that isn’t in Japanese. WTF, library? But it does look pretty sweet if you could get your hands on it:

Pandemonium and parade : Japanese monsters and the culture of yōkai / Michael Dylan Foster (Berkeley, Calif. ; London : University of California Press, c2009)
Contents: Introduction to the weird -- Natural history of the weird : encyclopedias, spooky stories, and the bestiaries of Toriyama Sekien -- Science of the weird : inoue enryō, kokkuri, and human electricity -- Museum of the weird : modernity, minzokugaku, and the discovery of yōkai -- Media of the weird : Mizuki Shigeru and kuchi-sake-onna -- Yōkai culture : past, present, future.

Date: 2010-10-07 05:54 am (UTC)
fulselden: Zuko, fish on head. (Better.)
From: [personal profile] fulselden
Well, there could be both DISGUISED NINJA-ING and SHIRT-SWAPPING HIJINKS – Zuko could find out the weird properties of Dai Li uniforms through inadvertent shirt-swappage, endure a day of shenanigans, and then find it expedient to get himself a uniform (preferably without a Dai Li agent already in it) when he really needs to know how to find a SECRET LIBRARY.
And yes, I think Azula + dragons could be a winning combination! Aaaand – they’d have to work out at least some of her issues, right? I mean, the dragons test you for something, and even if they aren’t exactly cuddly, I think Azula in any near-canon state would probably qualify for burninating. Or eating, or whatever. And I think an encounter with the magical rainbow fire of peace and balance might also calm her down somewhat – as well as presumably making her bending even more formidable? Plus, I feel that Ty Lee + booby-traps + grouchy/amused Sun Warriors has the potential for good times!
And good point re Zuko’s lack of acting chops. Oh Zuko.
And yes, I can absolutely see Mai sending Zhao packing, and eye rolling massively when she finds out that his brilliant plan is essentially to try and take Moscow, Napoleon style, thus freeing her up to start sorting things out in the Fire Nation.
Oh, Yue, problems! But actually, again, we could have both! A wanderjahr with Zuko and Iroh, perhaps when she realises that marrying jerk-dude isn’t for her and wouldn’t be good for her people either, followed by a trek back to the Northern Water Tribe (perhaps after she hears her father has died?), fightin’ spirits along the way.
And, yep, that book does look good, doesn’t it *crosses fingers*. And I’m sure there must be loads of stuff on Japanese folklore ... somewhere *is too lazy to do more catalogue-trawling right now...* Let me know if you find anything awesome! Plus, I guess a glance (!) across at China and Korea, fr’instance, might be useful – given the mix-n-match nature of the canon Fire Nation, it seems justified. If, y’know, daunting.

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